Well...my poems which I write and post are sort of short, rhyming sentences, but they aren't nonsensical, AT ALL! This salt and sugar was some pure diarrhea😆🤣...
Daffodils was my most favourite poem from Class 10, ICSE. I even wrote a whole post on the line "bliss of solitude"🤣
Yep true. but I just couldn't believe that we are calling them as poems too xP
I started writing my poems as a parody of these free verse poems. My intention was to make people laugh and glad I was successful!
With the ones, I mentioned in my post, those are essentially sentences which aren't even impactful in many cases - that's why I got a little confused. Chal kya rha h bhyi idhar free world ki duniya mein😆
Hehe... Poems without rhyme/meter are called free verse poems. Some of them are really good. For eg Banjara by Javed Akhtar. My all time favourite poem is a free verse poem titled "Hatasha se ek aadmi baith gaya" by Vinod Kumar Shukl 😍 but I agree ... Today people write shallow sentences and call it poetry 😒
I read one poem of yours and it feels like a poem in all the ways I know (and I'm not a pro in any way) and I also like poems now (at least the ones I can understand, which aren't many😆). My only confusion is when people write sentences and then call them as poems!
Well...my poems which I write and post are sort of short, rhyming sentences, but they aren't nonsensical, AT ALL! This salt and sugar was some pure diarrhea😆🤣...
Daffodils was my most favourite poem from Class 10, ICSE. I even wrote a whole post on the line "bliss of solitude"🤣
The Sherlock and Moriarty one was great! 😄
So relatable. For the longest time, poems had to rhyme for me to consider them as poems. But I still can't appreciate them completely.
Also, Rupi Kaur is not a poet. 😢
Thank you for liking these crap poems 😁
non-rhyming poems don't feel like real poems right! Thank you for saying that.
And for your last line please accept my highest of the high fives🙌
I realised after reading this that I actually liked those 🫣
I even liked your poems during lockdown. Whatever we may call it, if it makes a significant audience smile or laugh, it's worth keeping no?
Yep true. but I just couldn't believe that we are calling them as poems too xP
I started writing my poems as a parody of these free verse poems. My intention was to make people laugh and glad I was successful!
With the ones, I mentioned in my post, those are essentially sentences which aren't even impactful in many cases - that's why I got a little confused. Chal kya rha h bhyi idhar free world ki duniya mein😆
Hehe... Poems without rhyme/meter are called free verse poems. Some of them are really good. For eg Banjara by Javed Akhtar. My all time favourite poem is a free verse poem titled "Hatasha se ek aadmi baith gaya" by Vinod Kumar Shukl 😍 but I agree ... Today people write shallow sentences and call it poetry 😒
there is good poetry written in multiple ways and then there is modern whatever they call it 😂
A poem like yours
Starts my day
With a laughter
Rather
Than a smile
A comment
like this
makes me
smile from ear
to
ear
thank you! :D
I can never be a poet
I just know it
:(
Don't be
disheartened
O fellow writer!
Not just
Nike, even
You can do it!😂
@Aastha Harlalka do you realise that restacking this is going to start a revolution where everyone is going to start writing amazing crap poems?
Do you take responsibility for your actions?🤪
this
made me
laugh
- Aastha (2024)
Oh my God! Your poem touched my heart!
Can you send me an autograph please - modern poetess Aastha? 😂
Oh yes of course my dear boy! Please do send me your address. You have beseeched upon me for greatness and I shall grant it you. Worry not!
This comment alone is a testament of the greatness I've achieved. I shall feast on a Biryani now to celebrate!😎
Modern poetess approves 👍 👍 👍
I am giving
you a like
With a hope that your
engagement will see some spike 💀
Thank you
Rahul
I feel
Good.
😂😂😂
Thank you for the kind words Iqjot.
I read one poem of yours and it feels like a poem in all the ways I know (and I'm not a pro in any way) and I also like poems now (at least the ones I can understand, which aren't many😆). My only confusion is when people write sentences and then call them as poems!
However, glad that you liked the humor😄